Poet And You Know It!!

Subject: Poet And You Know It!! Thu Aug 21, 2008 12:30 pm

Hey guys! I'm yeahtoasty (you may have heard of me), and I would like to introduce to you... A Poet And You Know It Thread. Also known as PAYKIT!

The idea is run by two girls on a different forum by the name of Horses and Ccooper. I thought it would be a good idea to continue on this branch.

Okay here is what you do:

To become an official member, PM me a poem. Do not post before you become a member. I will reply to you ASAP, letting you know if you can become a member or not.

Along with contests, and random poem writing, you will also recieve helpful feedback from other users. *Yes* as a member, you can critique others' work. However, it *must* be constructive. Any bashing of the poems will result in a ban from PAYKIT and/or TMC.

Members: Cooliseo (by defualt) and yeahtoasty (by default).

Thanks and start writing poetry!!!

Subject: Re: Poet And You Know It!! Thu Aug 21, 2008 3:18 pm

I Look you in the eyes,
What do I see?
The lies that shine for me.
The cruelness that lies beneath?

Please take 3 steps back.
Think twice before you admit to me
Those selfish little, sneaky lies.
You think I don't notice them
But I do, on my time.

I'm a new POEM'er.

So I am NOT good.

Sorry, But it's true! It sometimes helps me get my anger away though, And cools me down!